Caught up in your web.
Trapped with no way out.
No use to even struggle.
Life's end is certain, no doubt.
Soon I'll be devoured.
Just a shell will remain.
Such are the penalties
When caught up in your deadly game.
A contest entry
- Not so Delightful Picture Inspired Contest by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended April 3, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. i think that this is very well written. This poem just proves that you do not need to use a lot of words to get your point across.
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oooh great flow and hopeless beauty.


Thank you for this wonderful entry in my contest.
Delila

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Sounds like a person that it's best to get away from. I think the sooner the better. I hope this isn't personal.



