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Trapped

Caught up in your web.
Trapped with no way out.
No use to even struggle.
Life's end is certain, no doubt.
Soon I'll be devoured.
Just a shell will remain.
Such are the penalties
When caught up in your deadly game.

A contest entry

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  • Pollycheck
    May 12, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my short poems contest. i think that this is very well written. This poem just proves that you do not need to use a lot of words to get your point across.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    April 3, 2008

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    oooh great flow and hopeless beauty.
    Thank you for this wonderful entry in my contest.


    Delila


  • Keystone Theater
    March 28, 2008

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    Sounds like a person that it's best to get away from. I think the sooner the better. I hope this isn't personal.