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home alone

No one is home beside me I can do what i want
I turn you on and place my hand on your neck
I run my finger Up and down your neck
making you scream knowing i made you do that
as i hear my mom walk in me time is over
so i hang up my guitar and wait to be home alone once again.

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  • Purush
    March 28, 2008

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    All the best in my contest

    OH! COZY THOUGHTS
    I LOVE THE OFF TAKE
    It reminded me of my student days

    "making you scream in streams of thoughts"
    +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

    where i was working on mathematics alone
    during my sickness for a month.
    new text with a kind of different flavour enticed me then.
    good
    All the best in my contest


  • Killerzombies
    March 28, 2008

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    Haha nice.


    the last line need edited.
    you have "to home alone" I think you mean "to be home alone". Nice write !