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make-up and fake smlies

look into my eyes
and tell me what you see
can you find
the real true me?

behind all the make-up
are my tear stained cheeks
behind my smile
is the frown you can't see

so everyday i put on make-up
and pretend to smile
so i can fool everyone
for a while

it seems to be working
cause no one can see
the sadness
that lies inside of me

the hurt that i have taken
all throughout these years
the pain that i have inflicted
only on myself
just to end my pain
for a little while

so i'll cry myself to sleep
just to carry on
so i can wake up
and move along

so if you think you got me figured out
nice try, but guess again
just look into my eyes
and tell me what you see
tell yourself the truth,not what you want it to be

do you guys and gals like the last stanza i'm not so sure about it

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  • penman gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    Excellent

    wonderful thoughts, so very well expressed. thank you for sharing.