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Your Games

You glance in my direction
And it is like you look right through me
It is as if you can not see me
I dance, I scream, I demand your attention
And yet you stare on.

You joke and talk to my friends
I try to be witty and coy
Do you even notice
I sing, I joke, I lean toward you
and yet you talk on

You say it is a charade
I try to have my own
Sometime you don't seem to even care
I try, I try, I try to get you off my mind
and yet . . . I can't

When no one else is around
I hold your entire attention
Then you get what you want
and it's back to being cool
I lie here and cry

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  • lalaland024
    April 3, 2008

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    it kind of reads like lyrics because of the repetitiveness (which resembles a chorus)
    this is nice..
    thank you for your entry


  • james119
    March 29, 2008
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    sad, but true for too many
    nice write