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My he done me wrong song

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 Do not want to be special any more

 

you always said I was

 

Stop this bus wanna get off

 

being your special girl

 

is rough

 

you get the money

 

I get the work

 

you get the fun honey

 

I get the hurt

 

who is that blond with the little black dress

 

I see you with while bustin my ass

 

that lil brunette wound round your arm

 

all kissy kissy up in your face as I

 

justa bout wreck going by our place!

 

honey, darlin, baby can't take no more

 

watch this woman goin out the door

 

takin  my bags cleaned out our space

 

and what you don't know baby

 

checks are going to return

 

this girl's not she's on slow burn.

 

like the country music songs

 

long gone, in a hurry, on a train

 

took your money, broken heart

 

lots of crying lotsa pain

 

by you

 

bye you.

 

I am woman hear me laugh

 

riding on a railroad.

 

with my six shooter by my side,

 

make my day you ready to die?

 

know when to foldem,

 

know when to walk away,

 

damn sure know when to run.

 

ah Reba girl just havin fun.

 

want a taste of my last whiskey?

 

all a good woman needs is a dog, a horse,

 

a saddle,

 

and a Bible

 

so she won't get rattled.

 

some beans for the trail

 

some bacon...

 

so forth

 

so long.

 

your cheatin heart

 

 

has you doin

 

 

me all kinds

 

 

of wronnnnng.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Option 2 adult words I love all country music I am a cowgirl though born and bred for it. Reba is still my favorite. This was written for fun to make people smile.

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  • Symphony
    October 2, 2008

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    awesome

    man i would dig to hear this set to music i bet it would be awesome; congrats on the well deserved gold trophy this was brilliant


  • takemypainaway
    September 19, 2008
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    i love this you brought forth all parts of country music!!


  • smonte19124 gold member
    September 18, 2008
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    Soul Music thats what I call country

    This is absolutely fantastic and very deserving of receiving the Gold. I love country songs and you represented them very well. That I love country music is a family secret so don't tell nobody. LOL Per my nephews who only like rap music, he claims I am a disgrace to the family because of this. But I say the hell with them I like what I like. LOL God Bless

  • blackened vains
    September 10, 2008
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    bellad says it. these words should be put to music pronto!


  • BellaD
    August 31, 2008

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    Love this. It's just crying to be set to music and sung out loud! Great voice. Congrats on the well deserved gold.


  • RestlessDreamer
    August 30, 2008
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    I like this a lot. My favorite lines are...

    Do not want to be special any more
    you always said I was
    Stop this bus wanna get off
    being your special girl
    is rough

    ...There is so much emotion in them, and they set the tone and style for the rest of the song. It is beautifully written. Great job!

  • dillpickle62
    August 27, 2008

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    Wow!

    You should be in the music industry. Little Tinker Bell what a cute picture. You did make me chuckle. 'The checks returning" A freeload'in womanizer. Am I on the right track with that line? Congrat's with this golden winner.


  • The Drifter
    August 22, 2008
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    My he done me wrong song

    This is GREAT-Wondrful--What more can I say--YES!
    bw


  • james119
    May 11, 2008
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    sure glad I ain't him

    great write, it gave me smiles


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    May 3, 2008
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    I loved it.....you couldn't help

    but sing along...howling like a hound dog...enjoying
    each word and verse!
    Loved it!
    ears/Seattle

  • Nighttime angel
    April 13, 2008

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    Congratulations on the Gold Trophy sister pot. I love this poem of yours, its a fantastic write. I am so proud of you sissy.

    kat


  • Sagerider
    April 11, 2008

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    Congratulations

    I've got to admit you out did me on that one. Congratulations on a great write. I wonder if revenge is sweet or just more pain.

  • Michael P gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    who's been treatin you as such? This sure feels like it was written from the heart-very well written emotions but then I expect nothing less from you-great poem Rheea-peace


  • Sagerider
    March 29, 2008
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    Oh, That is a good take on the contest.

    This is a great one. I'd hate to be the target. You'll always be special.

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