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Binding my Heart [to take it all out]

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Starting fires
you couldn't control
to manifest destruction.

 

Until light bore

and you

extinguished me.

Author notes

15words.
pic credit:By *Dragonfly* on Flickr

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  • urapns66
    April 1, 2008

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    awsome! i love the end the best its very short and sweet and i can definitely dig that! great job, keep it up, and good luck!


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    March 29, 2008
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    Good write congratulations on bronze


  • Kari gold member
    March 28, 2008

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    Congrats on the bronze here. Very well deserved.
    It does hurt when someone betrays us like that.

    Kari


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 28, 2008
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    Immensely creative and indeed quite grasping... x


  • In Too Deep1
    March 28, 2008

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    Intriguing and well penned write! Wonderful flow and deliverance on this thought provoking poem. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp


  • letters to no one
    March 28, 2008
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    I really, really like this.

    Good luck in the contest!

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