A life created
In my wandering years...
Beautiful daughter
With so many tears...
For you
Author notes
Written about my younger daughter whose father has hurt her in many ways.
A contest entry
- Contest with a twist by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 28, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - SHORT POEMS PART 3 by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended April 5, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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amazing little poem
thank you so much for entering. great use of words, so little amount of words so much meaning. Great poem, as always
amazing grace17 -
How sincerely touching and emotional... x
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wow! this is very emotional and sad. but lovely sweet write, and good luck
take care
stephanie =)
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