You look my way, it doesn’t mean a thing
But I want it to be more
Those looks and smiles you give me
They are what I live for
But you do not know
That every thing you do
Drives me crazy
I just want to be with you
I can’t stand it
To see you with her
Your perfect girlfriend
Your precious pearl
But when I see you look at her
I know what is true
You love her more then life
And I know my own is threw
But you are my friend
So I’ll stay by your side
Until you don’t need me
And toss me aside
Author notes
option 1 number 6 Hope you enjoy ^_^
A contest entry
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600 points, ended April 2, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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hey i like this a lot
i like the flow and rhythm
but did you enter twice?
the entry before this is identical and i dont have your author info
so if you can please remove the other one if it is yours...if not i will unfortunatly have to disqualify both of the enteries
good luck in the final judging -
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Yes the other one is mine. My computer was tweeking out when I entered and I guess it submitted it twice ^^;. Sorry and I'm glad you like it ^_^
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