Jungle rhythm,
the metronome
of torsos
joined.
Tangled
in the linen of skin.
My flower is a strawberry
d
i
p
p
e
d
in sugar.
It glitters in the reverie
of your gaze.
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Yummmmmm! I want more!
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Fruity in so many ways tanz. Flicking between your words and the picture this really is a scintillating piece. They gel just enough to keep an erotic friction.
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A glittering write that sparkled with sensuality!!! I will be looking at strawberries in a whole new way!!!
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lol - you just ooze sexuality don't ya?
lovely my friend, truly beautiful!!!
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'Tangled in the linen of skin' oooh, I loved it
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Gaia,
this is a very tantalizing write here..I think I will go see if there is any strawberries in the fridge now..
**Master Ktulu**
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This is a beautiful write, seemed metaphorical and was also very sensual. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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It is sensual, romantic, beautiful. If dipped in chocolate it would be perfect. I wish you best of luck in the contest.
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