Cleansing drops
caress my face
cold wind blows
through my body
~Soul~
Comes to life.
Author notes
prompt ~rain~ 15 words
A contest entry
- It's a little cold today by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 28, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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Nice little poem I enjoyed reading it!!
~Ocean~ -
Beautiful little poem. It is very well penned and displays a lot of emotion with so few words. Great use of words or should I say lack of words. This has amazing imagery, especially for it short length. Lovely title as well.
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How beautifully creative... x Thanks ever so much for sharing and many blessings to you too... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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