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Dead Cold Heart

Missing image

Bliss wrapped fingers
cascading my face
awakening senses

to falsification

 

As fire burned up
melting the sun
hearts set in flames

roasting demands

Minds cursed belief
wakening to beds
abandoned in barrens
frozen hearts whisper lies,
 

"I love you" echoed

 

forever in winter.

 

Author notes

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Prompt:
1. Cold as Ice

pic credit:By Bippla on Flickr

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  • Kari gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    This piece was so amazing, and really so very deep. Outstanding job here from beginning to the very end


  • Desire gold member
    March 29, 2008

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    Wow!!

    Powerful piece You have penned and the images also the emotions stun the Mind-Spirit!!
    Magnificent take on the prompt...

    Congratulations on Your HM!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    March 29, 2008
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    Great write


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    March 29, 2008

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    Excellent!

    Brilliant take on the prompt, "Cold as Ice"
    The rock group Foreigner would be very proud.
    Emotions flow from your words...
    Poingant as well as beautiful.
    Your picture is perfect for your write as well.
    Well penned

    Thank you for your entry and I wish you the best in the contest!

    Take care
    PEACE
    David


  • letters to no one
    March 28, 2008
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    Awww this is so beautiful!

    Good luck!

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