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Demons

The past comes to haunt
it comes back to taunt
The evil we wish we could take back
The bad things we have done
the morales we lack
the bad things we shun
we all have the demons
we must learn to live with them


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  • Keystone Theater
    March 28, 2008

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    Well either learn to live with them or find ways to eliminate them, but your advice is sound and your poem is a good lesson for others to learn.

  • vampirelover23
    March 28, 2008
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    interesting

    I realy like this. You made a point without having to make me read 50 lines.