Smile, laugh,
it's alright really.
Honestly, I don't mind;
knowing you won't notice
As I wither away with time.
Author notes
Picture prompt
A contest entry
- PIF- quickie by luna-midnight.
300 points, ended March 29, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Where shall I improve?
Comments
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i like this alot, because it is filled with emotion, thanks so much for entering and good luck
though even though you didnt use pic, id liek you to credit it just the same
thank you and take care
stephanie -
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Thank you for reading and enjoying! =]
But, if I may ask, what do you mean I didn't use the picture? -
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lol. i mean you didnt use the pic when writting your poem...but could you please still credit the picture?
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