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there are times when i really want to just be honest with you
and then there are times
where i wonder
if that would even change
because regardless of what i think i feel for you i know you are
out
of
my
league

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  • KenjiStar81
    March 29, 2008
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    It's amazing how a short poem can say so much.. Like a song bird in a large field still able to sing his little song and somewhere across the pond or byond the forest a female responds and he knows that his little voice has not only been heard but he has a friend in this scary cold lonely world.. And things dont seem so bad anymore..

    Wish I could help you more and a little part of me thinks I may know whom this speaks upon but also know I am here for you if ever you need to talk..

    This was a beautifully written work.. I enjoy the sweet simpleness where the few words spoken speak leagues of sonnets and songs between each carefully placed letter and line..


    • nanashiamai
      March 29, 2008

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      well, its about sign name - singer. which is pretty obvious. >_< i wish i wasn't so lame about things. one of these days i need to get some balls and actually talk and be honest about all this stuff. unfortunately i'm a pansy.

      thanks dear. i'm glad you like it. you are awesome. ^_^

      • KenjiStar81
        March 29, 2008

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        When the time is right then you will find your little voice to grow strong.. And I thought it was about the singer.. As for me being awsome.. *shucks* Thanks but I really don't think I am.. Your very welcome..


  • suzume
    March 28, 2008

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    I really wish there was something that I could say to make you think differently about yourself. I really do. I wish that I could make you believe that there isn't anything like "out of your league". It's just... I'm typing stuff I should probably type elsewhere...
    I wish I could talk to face to face.
    I hope you're doing well.

    • nanashiamai
      March 28, 2008
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      thanks dear....sorry i didn't call you when i was home. i missed your call and when i got your message, there was family over and it was crazy and...you konw how it goes. ::hugs:: i miss you...i wish i could talk to you face to face.

      i hope you are doing well too.

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