i have never felt a love this intensely
i have never been so consumed by a lover
to be so turned inside out by a person
i dont know where he begins and i end
to take one person so deeply
to accept another persons love
no air to breathe would be enough
how can someone touch me in one place
and feel them touching my very soul
i am dazed and overwhelmed
how can this be such an emotion
to take me and turn me into light
could he eat me alive i wonder
if he tried would i care
such pleasure from something so intense
i am obsessed with being possessed by him
A contest entry
- LOVE IS IN THE AIR.......LET YOUR LOVE HEART SHINE! BIG POINTS!!!!! by ears2hearyou.
1200 points, ended April 11, 2008, 19 entries
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Awe the grandeur of love
you really released your soul in this write, found all
the right words to express that grandeur that is
found in love!
well done poet, well done!
ears/Seattle
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This was very interesting.. thank you very much for entering..
Good luck..
Peace to you, Jetleena
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Beautifully written.
Strong emotion shown.
Intense and loving.
Well done.
-Saint
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thanks for catchin that for me hun
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I know the feeling and it's a pretty great one! This was another lovely piece... full of so much emotion and personality. I really enjoyed it... good luck in the contest doll... Oh just so you know:
"possed" in the last line should be "possessed"
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