Babies are Little Angels that fly to the earth
Their wings disappear at the time of their birth
One look in their eyes and we're never the same
They are part of us now and that part has a name
That part is your heart and a bond that won't sever
Our Babies are Little Angels we love them forever
A contest entry
- ♥I'm gonna be a Mommy!♥ by Kitsune Kyuuketsuki.
300 points, ended September 3, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Baby on the Way!!! by JustFallingApart.
300 points, ended October 13, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Baby Time! :D by Missa.
400 points, ended March 12, 20 entries
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aww...I love the picture!!! the poem is really good too...short, but good...good luck!
Alicia Lynn
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HAHA! This is absolutely adorable!
I really enjoyed reading this and thank you
for your entry. However, please read my contest
rules again. Your write has to at least be twenty lines long. I will have to remove your entry unless you decide to add more to it or enter something else. Thank you again!
Jeremy0826 -
IT'S SO CUTE I LOVE IT!!!!
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such a great poem and the pic is SO CUTE!!
best of luck
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Nice
They're sent by God and truly they're angels. But they need our help in many ways. We should always try to encourage them towards good behaviours and ways of life. We should make them believe that they can achieve any good thing in life from the start. Never discourage them and always be their friends rather than parents or guardians cos eventually that's all that matters. -
Sp sweet, good floe, rhythm and rhyme. The picture is darling - how can anyone not love little babes? Angels indeed.
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I wrote this for my sister as shes expecting a baby and I love babies too,thank you for commenting
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Awwwwww!
Me thinks someone is excited about being an auntie!!! lol! This is beautiful Hazel...love the rhyming. ***Pam***
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I sure am excited
,Hazel
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You will make a great auntie Hazel! That little baby girl will be so lucky! ***Pam***
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SO ADORABLE!!!!
This is just the cutest!!!! Our children are indeed our little angels and yes, they enter our hearts and bring such happiness and love.
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Thank you for commenting on this,this is something that means extra value as my sister is expecting a baby
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very beautiful
This is uplifting poem.
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Thank you for commenting on this,Hazel
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Love It.
This is such a happy uplifting poem. I loved the first two lines. I dont I have heard such a sweetly poetical and original comparison of babies to angels. It is wonderful.
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Thank you for commenting on here,I was inspired to write this after hearing my sister is pregnant and I love babies,they bring peace to you and I must say this is one I am proud of
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