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Truth

Mankind
S l a u g h t e r s
Animals

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The Brevette created by Emily Romano consists of a subject (noun,verb, and object (noun) in that exact order.The verb should show an ongoing action by spacing out the letters.Only three words.No syllable or rhyme restrictions or requirements.

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  • The Poetic Angel
    March 30, 2008

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    congrats on the shiny mum it was well deserved i love this kind of form you have done short but perfik it sure fits its title..smiles..

    xxx cheeky xxx

  • Billbard silver member
    March 29, 2008

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    Thanks lots for your entry into The Brevette Contest.I trust you njoyed writng it as much as i did reading it.


  • LanguishedLad
    March 29, 2008

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    Interesting

    I like this form of verse, I couldn' do it myself because I look for too much meaning and want to say too much in my pennings. I really liked this poem the words are too true and very powerful. Good luck in the contest and keep up the good pennings.


  • FransB gold member
    March 28, 2008

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    I like this. There is much to write in a three worded write such as this. Your title and focus of your poem are alike the other. Good luck in the contest. Frans


  • DogFish silver member
    March 28, 2008
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    Yes but...

    Tigers
    Eat
    Children
    !


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 28, 2008

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    your words are simple but yet extremly effective because as your title says it does spell truth. an amazing piece gran

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