Between my legs
Hirsute razor slit
Sanctum of life
Red skinned nascent epicene
Step into mortal world
Eyes wide open
to see his kill
Lambent desire to drink
and be again thirsty.
Between my legs
Myriad strokes send scintilla
Crimson colors envelope my skin
I shine shadows
Coeval hell and heaven
my each eye.
Spare your beer
For my libation
Tie any weed
For my healing,
My only drug
Lies at my hand length
Between my legs
Hold on razors
Shadows tears power pain
Blood moral and brain
Anyway I am coming.
A contest entry
- Dark poetry!!!! (english and spanish poetry) by Suicide Hotline.
525 points, ended March 31, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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The poem is a whirlwind. I felt like I was spiraling down this piece... kind of like a rollarcoaster as well. With every line came another image, another concrete hit. I like the repeating of "between my legs"/ "razors". It added this "umph" to the poem that appealed to me as the reader. The ending was good as well. "Anyway I am coming" ~ dark and chilling.
Thanks for your entry.
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You might not understod the instructions. But thats ok! Its a great write and thanks for the entery!
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blood red eye
thank you and you like it is enough, I know I might not have followed instructions but it just came seeing those words and the picture on your profile
thanks and keep it up
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