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That Look

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waves of yearning
gently rolling across
the sands of time

anticipation rising,
a raging crescendo
washes away logic

treading waters
of pure exhilaration,
desperately seeking
an island of rationale

no sanctuary on the horizon,
I succumb to that look

drowning in the depths of azure

 

 

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  • Perfectly Imperfect
    March 31, 2008

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    This is a beautiful take on the prompt Well done and thank you for taking the time to enter x


  • Cannonsfire
    March 29, 2008

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    Blue eyes crying in the rain *sigh oh the things that could have been


  • azure85 gold member
    March 28, 2008

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    A very romantic poem, with all the depths of feelings as the two are waiting. A lovely poem penned by your hand!