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once more

Looking into your brown eyes
I breath in your scent

Parting my lips

I whisper

...be mine...

you smile

raising up your hands

you cup my face

lifting me up

you slowly come closer

kissing my lips gently

my mind explodes

all the possibilitys

and we got all night

Nothing could make me as happy

as I am right now

Nothing could make my heart beat

any faster then this moment

puting my arms around you

settleing in small of your back

I hold you tightly

scared to let go

for this moment to end

I never want to see you walk away

I never want to say goodbye

but soon our fun will end

and I will no longer have you

to breath in

to see that smile

But the air will become stale

and my heart will slow

walking out you turn around

for one last smile

skipping a breath

im left with a smile

my mind left with your image

hopeing only to see you once more

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • A Summer Depression
    March 28, 2008

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    wow that is an awesome poem almost reminds me of this book i read about a grl who fell in love w/ a vampire....kinda a complicated relationship. anywho awesome write luved it. keep writing

    dani