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Warped [[Like Wooden Dreams Of Golden Things]]

It's time
To abandon hands & hearts
Like children's toys
And school yard blues

"Let there be light!"
Screams a crowd of crows
"War is our final end!"
A man screams at our feet

There is nothing solid
Nothing sacred
All is hollow
Insecure

Let it be broken
Our hands & hearts
Abandon dreams of gold
And lay with your liars

Shining things
Left out to rust
The broken cities
Broken & bust

Let there be pain
And let it all rain
On us like a crying god
And burn our skins into dust


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It's warped, our lives on the brink of shattering at your feet.

Well....suppose you can give me something to work with?

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  • A-Daisy-Among-Roses
    May 11, 2008

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    This is an interesting perspective on life. I like this poem the best out of the few of yours that i read. The third and fith stanzas of this poem are really really good, they capture the mood of your poem perfectly. I am impressed.