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Haiku - Seasonal Transience

A__MG_0474_Snow_jopix by Graphic Details Photography. 

Light reflecting leaves
prepare fair sakura rain,
spring reigns, winter grieves

A__MG_0474_Snow_jopix by Graphic Details Photography.

 


 

Author notes

Pic Cherry Tree under NY Snow 2

http://www.flickr.com/photos/graphicdetails/124010646

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  • Kathraina silver member
    January 3

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    I love Haiku done well, and this is very well done
    Wonderful job on this piece. Everything works together so well. Beautiful. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest

    ♥ Kathraina

  • Broken-Bones
    August 20, 2008

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    This was beautiful. Your final line which gives the seasons feelings was really powerful to me. The image of the cherry tree leaves raining down was exquisite. Great Work x


  • Chaotic peaceofmind
    August 12, 2008
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    wow...

    all i can say is wow


  • janejainejayne gold member
    April 6, 2008
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    Springs Kiss!

    What bliss!


  • DogFish silver member
    March 28, 2008
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    Great effects! A delicate and touching poem,too!

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