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please dont go

Everyday I grow
Someways stronger
other more naive

I want to breath
without feeling like my lungs are going to collapse
It seems as if everyone is after us

The essence of you surrounds me
Managing to crack a smile
a flash of happiness fills me

The though of being able to see you
makes my palms sweaty
and my heart race

Only to be told it cant happen
do to a letter written out of stupidity
everythings holding us back

 


I do what i can just to get a glimpse
to get a touch
a touch of pure happiness
It happens to fast
and your already gone

I wonder to myself

how many times must this happen

till i finally break down

and nothing will do

unless im beside you

 

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  • A Summer Depression
    March 28, 2008

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    omg

    i love this poem & i do agree w/ cloudy breakfast it sounds like something from twilight lol. i love the beauty of the words keep writing like this, cause its totally wicked!

    dani

  • Punzel
    March 28, 2008
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    Oh my gosh I love this. And it reminds me of a book character, haha. Have you ever read the Twilight series? This sounds like something Jacob Black might write about Bella. Haha. I'm obsessed with that book. Anyway, awesome poem! I love the last part. (BTW you spelled break wrong lol.)