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I'm a little Leprecaun!

I’m a little leprecaun
short and green.
Here is my kidney,
here is my spleen.
If you follow the rainbow you will find
me and the gold at the end.

Author notes

If you forgot, you are supposed to read this in the tune of I'm A Little Tea Pot!

A contest entry

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  • xox-emma-xox
    March 29, 2008

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    Hee Hee^_^ Good work! I like the theme!I wouldn't change a thing about it but I think the end could use some work, though. Other than that it is perfect! Good (Irish) luck in the contest!