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I Love You


I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you

I need you as a baby needs to be close to his mother.
I need you as a baby carries in him the secret of a growing man.
Thanks to your care. I cannot trade it with another.
You've lived secretively inside me since the time began.

I do not consider you like a wild-raging fire
Or the wave of sparks the flame shoots off higher.
You are the passion that burns down my insides in a row.
There is not better time than how I am now

I love you positively. A good thing has to be prized,
Between the shelters of my heart, that I’m advised.
All I write is for love of you.
You are a thing of great value.

I love you without knowing how and reservations.
I love you truly, without complications or suspicions.
I love you because I don’t know any other way to.
My love to you, is where doubt doesn't exist.

I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you

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  • yassmin
    March 28, 2008

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    You live secretively in my heart since time began.

    I do not take you as if you were a wild-raging fire,
    or the wave of sparks the flame shoots off higher

    that's really sweet and heart breaking,love is life's miracle it a real miracle that ALLAH gave us,lovely words and more lovlier feelings






    • Scarzat
      March 29, 2008
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      Jazm

      Hi!

      Jazm,

      It’s been a quite long time since we talked.
      Thanks to your comment. It is as beautiful as you are.
      You really lifted up my spirit as I woke up this morning and read it.

      Take care!

      Scarzat