Collide, press into me
Our bodies adhering to
each other, from the
sweat of our naughty
and wet pleasures
The temperature rises
as we release ourselves
into submission, of all
that we crave inside
A sexual explosion of
infusing making love
and extreme fucking,
as the hunger and our
imagination intensifies
I push you against the
wall and take you so
forcefully, as you grip
my ass and bite my neck
You shove me onto the bed
and gently pivot your hips
your hair in my face and
the smell of sex in the
air makes me want you more,
grind into me, lover...
Author notes
http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee111/MAJESTIC-ANGEL/sensual_a_dois.jpg
In a list
A contest entry
- Sexual seduction (pics) by joleahe.
300 points, ended April 2, 2008, 23 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
Hot
Makes the flesh between mt legs warm and tingle. Loved it. Said everything you need to hear and kept going. Thanks for sharing! Hope my reply isn't to graphic!
-
It doesn't feel like a poem, more like reading a page out of the playboy forum... it didn't really flow, like the third stanza didn't make cohesive sense to me at all, the tenses are all over the place, (sexual explosion of infusing lovemaking?) but to each their own! I'm NOT trying to put you down, in any way... Just trying to help, because this has the framework to be really good!!! Just needs some attention to grammer... But you got a silver trophy so congrats. for that!!!
-
oh golly.... i had to take care of somethin after readn this....whew......luvd it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Adding your comment:
