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deep in splendor
of closed comfort doors,
I see you (dream-
scaping)
atoning with
open mouth of silence.
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Author notes
Written March 28, 2008
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Comments
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I wouldn't alter this at all, it has a solid base and lets the mind flow freely as well. I think it is an excellent poem.
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Very Good.
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hhhmmmm...I can relate to this .....yes very nice...
Good luck
Simon
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