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Starlight; Star Bright

Starlight Star bright
catch a star and take a bite
if the star does burn your tongue
put it back where it hung
But if the star tastes nice and sweet
you may sit with clouds beneath your feet.

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  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    April 22, 2008

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    This is so cute to read

    It feels like you had a lot of fun writing it, I love the rhythm and rhyme, in fact it makes a super nursery rhyme, what a gorgeous inspiration, thank you

    ~LIlac