i bought
sweet candies and some
orchids and lilies
i thought
you'd come
perfectly i dressed
shadows upon my eyes
and i was blessed
in hearing you
calling me
in loving you
darling of me
time far from you
was moving so slow
you,you only you
is my passion glow
i thought
i would see you
i even perfectly dressed
but my day was messed...
you didn't come
i thought
you love me
i thought yes..
what a silly thought......
Comments
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Once I got the hang of the flow of this piece I began to like it. A couple of readings confirmed that impression.
Good work.
Jim

