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i thought

i bought
sweet candies and some
orchids and lilies
i thought

you'd come
perfectly i dressed
shadows upon my eyes
and i was blessed

in hearing you
calling me

in loving you
darling of me

time far from you
was moving so slow
you,you only you
is my passion glow

i  thought
i would see you

i even perfectly dressed
but my day was messed...


you didn't come
i thought
you love me

i thought yes.. 

what a silly thought......









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  • I-Like-Rhymes silver member
    April 1, 2008

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    Once I got the hang of the flow of this piece I began to like it. A couple of readings confirmed that impression.
    Good work.
    Jim