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At the hop


1950's soul
At the hope, with my baby by my side.
the music slows down,
we start to rock slowly back and forth
kissing each other when the dean was not looking.

The hop come to a end,
we jump into are duster,
and we tock a drive to inspiration point and
made out in the back set.

 

We got home at midnight

and her daddy said,

I can't see her ever again

 

Her love came to a end

with the 45 pistol to his head.

 

The gun was still smocking,

and a with only one shote left she end her life as well.  

 

 

 

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"Are you an open book?"
"Are you transparent?"

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  • warrior-eagle
    April 24, 2008
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    This was...different.
    Thanks for
    entering my contest.

    ..Simply Me♥