Dance with me.
I don't know how either;
I'll look silly too;
We can stumble through it
together.
It'll give me an excuse to hold onto you.
A contest entry
- Short Poems by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 26, 2008, 179 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This is a very well written poem that does a great job of getting your point across.
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LOL the immagery I'm getting in my mind is comical but in a romantic way. Cute write!
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Great Poem
Yes dance is a wonderful way to get close to those we care about. Lovely asnd soft imagery. You take care, Sandy
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Here we have a very simple, straightforward look at one of the main reasons people dance! This reminds me of my experience at college the second time around, when I went to a lot of dances, even though I had been raised to believe it was wrong.
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