lust is a gage
to measure his desire
when he is wild
he fucks like a beast
when he is passionate
he makes love like a god
when he wants you
you are a full course meal
you are his bidding slave
when he needs you
you are his goddess
you are his whore
you are everything he wants
in all his carnal desires
the mixed pleasures
when he wants you hard
he will make you scream
when he wants you soft
he will make you sigh with relief
and when he does it
he will do it all
with a smile on his face
Author notes
welcome co hosts
A contest entry
- dirty by tara wilson.
950 points, ended April 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very erotic luv it and good luck
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"lust is a gage
to measure his desire"
I love these opening lines so much - they sure set the tone for the whole poem - very erotic, wow, thanks so much for this entry!
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Wonderfully hot, lustful write. You capture the variability of sex, how it can be hot and breathless one time and slow and sighing another. Variety being the spice of life.
Good luck in the contest.
CaliOkie
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The flow of this was spectacular and what a poem it was. Very erotic indeed.
The secret to great sex is in knowing when to be his "whore" or his "goddess". Also in when to take the control and roll with it.
Becky
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Oh damn! I like it!! You have really been focusing on sensual and provocative writes lately haven't you? Well I love this attitude on you. It totally fits. You have such a way of bringing the reader in and ... almost feeling as if they were being said these things... as if this was written especially for them... male or no. Very nice job. Love it... Keep it up and good luck.
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