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Self Critisism

Negative,
is the only word
that I truly understand.
Everything is
wrong or horrible
or hideous of untrue.
Everything is
not good enough...
I'm not good
enough.
People ask if
anything is wrong
and if I'm ok.
NO.
I'm not...
I'm trapped
inside of myself,
inside the darkness,
inside the bitterness,
inside the hurt and sadness,
I'm trapped and
it hurts,
it hurts like
I'm stabbing myself
with a knife...
with the knife of
self criticism.

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  • Bella Luna
    March 29, 2008
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    You shuoldn't b hard on yourself your an amazing person and a lot of people care about u and r on your side. good poem thought my favorite part is :I'm trapped
    inside of myself,
    inside the darkness,
    inside the bitterness,
    inside the hurt and sadness,