slowly but surely
we all melt away
spilt and sinking
fond of thinking
sound
cease crisp crease
see the found unknown
the crown
of the castle
sinking faster and faster
crowded and crumbling
funding
read of the sabine women
frightened to carry on
falling to fail
feel the floor
come back for more
Author notes
the thoughts just came to me... this is how i saw.
A contest entry
- Quickie...Pic inspired - 1 more entry needed by Unsigned.
500 points, ended March 31, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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This was interesting. I couldn't really get into it myself, but... I'm sure others will love it. Good luck!
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This really works for me...I love abstract...well done you
Good luck
Simon
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