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Wasters

Waiting Eroded Against Reflective Eunuch's
Arched Lover Laments Jaded Underground
Sunny Towers Wall's Aghast Shine
Take In Nights Grief Adventure's Wishing Away Youths Dreams
Engineered Asbestosis Tortures Hearts
Riled Up Invisible Nightmares
Speak At Lifes Lips






Author notes

My word is wasters , my sentence is "We are all just wasting away death ruins all"

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  • Deathletter
    March 31, 2008
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    Thanks mate

    Thanks man im glad you liked it and thanks for the award and comments!


  • drumdog79
    March 31, 2008

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    Some very cool phrases and imagery in this one, thanks for entering. It kind of seems disjointed which is usually (or maybe...possibly) a bad thing, but it fits the subject. "Wasters" just being out of it, disjointed from life; not taking it by the horns and really living in a cognacent(sp?) manner. Pretty cool.