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Saga 5...The Yin Yang Friends

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The white mare and the dark horse

are friends along the sea

Galloping down the beach together

being happy and carefree

 

Their emotions both want control

in a land of fantasy and ecstasy

Their dreams are so similar

and flucuate constantly

 

They're a team when working together

on an assignment meant to be

Both communicate to the common goals

and enjoy each others company

 

They say opposites do attract

this certainly appears to be true

The white mare and the dark horse

are friends and lovers too

 

Both like to spend time alone

and have freedom of the mind

Yin and Yang run from each other

it seems that true love is blind

 

Their future looks bleak and hopeless

for a fenced in kind of settled life

Both adhere to being restless

neither can stand confinement or strife

 

In their makeup they are opposites

and argue more than need be

They're the Yin and Yang of romance

both deserve and want to remain free

 

 

 

 

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  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    March 29, 2008

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    A romantic, yet wisely astute piece,
    capturing the full price of freedom!

    Brilliant.

    Aesthete


  • arafura gold member
    March 28, 2008
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    But there is a force that draws them back together... well written my friend!