No winged angel
No leaf clover
I don't have to look at you
Listening to the echo of your toothless mouth
Because your prayer
The oh so summoned
Loathe Obstructed Via Emptiness
Discharge
Am I the sinner?
My blood against the emerald sap
Is it yours?
Snot running down
The slime marionettes trying to put an end
A hug from dissection remnants
Creeping from lawn to my shoes
Want to reach me again?
Lurking
Can't your consoles teach you some?
Or how much do you need?
My marrow is being drained
But you can smile again
As I shake my arms
And mucus is thrown away
Traps don't work twice
Author notes
Option 1: Liars
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Comments
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THis is a great poem you wrote about liars. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in my contest!
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this was very! i liked the imagery you used. this was very original. thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox
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This was okay I was well written, something just didn't click with me though.
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EEEWWW! The mucus theme is kinda nasty, but effective. I really liked the cutsie anger/name calling in the first couple lines...the word-pictures were amusing. Thanks for the entry!
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i messed up that last comment sorry
i think you meant four leaf clover
well writen
i think its good
i like the last words
Traps don't work twice
very very good work her
thanks for sharing
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I thought no leaf clover was cool because that's the name of a metallica song, so I thought it was a reference.
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I don't like Metallica, but I must accept it might create a confusion or even a reference towards them, but anyway, the No Leaf Clover is correct. A clover without leaves only gives bad luck.
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i think you meant four leaf clover
well writen
i think its good
Traps don't work twice
very very good work her
thanks for sharing
i like the last words -
they surely dont
at least not for a guy like myself
i cant role with a lier are
a person who has security issues
it takes to much to un do for me
on point
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