Oh! Where are thee
Who's heart is bound to mine?
What place are ye?
And could these questions be -
Thrice wondered - also thine's?
A contest entry
- It's All About Love. by Poetryintheblood.
425 points, ended March 30, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very old fashioned words used here - unusual reading, but liked the thoughts you ask in these lines.
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I'm not crazy on the old world style of this one. It seems a bit short to go there and a little unfinished to me. But I do like the line of questioning
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Short and beautiful, thank you for your entry, good luck, Josie
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Oh so perfect. Short indeed, but so poignant and powerful that length might overwhelm me. So incredible. You are quite a goddess of poetry, dear friend... splendid!
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I loved this. Loved the language too. Excellent poetry here.
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An excellent take on the prompt.. a beautifully written poem.. I simply loved it.. good luck.. Thanx for sharing..
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