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あん い いんさんえ?

I can see the world a burst with life
And I sometimes want to take it all with a kinfe
But I know it is wrong
It's hidden inside different songs

I love the way they smile and laugh
I want to see them in the blood bath
I thinkI might be going insane
But then again I could be perfectly sane

Maybe everyone else is crazy...
Maybe all those fucks who are lazy
They all are insane with thier smiles
I am normal with my Messed up dial

Laugh at me
Call me lame
Someday...someday
I will kill your name

Screw you people and your ideals
You are all fakes and I am real
I will show you all what I mean
Maybe someday I will be free

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The Name of this poem is in Japanese, it says, 'Am I Insane?'

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  • miyabichan1991
    October 9, 2008

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    it is very pointless to hate everyone. you are an amazing person colin. and if you are insane then im even more insane for loving you and i always will.


  • yore
    March 28, 2008
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    well it doesn't look like a poem to me, more like the lyrics to a song... you really should try to enrich your sentences with figurative language or more effective means that shed light to you're raging anger toward others. people will ask about the reason of these aggressive emotions and u haven't established that yet.
    it needs lot of work.


  • Indeed
    March 28, 2008

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    Calm the FUCK DOWN!
    I mean, Colin..

    Really... Don't hate people.
    because it will not get you ANYWHERE!

    Express Pure love, okay?
    it's difficult.
    But definately Worth it.

    don't try to be happy.
    When we stop trying.. we have good times.