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broken legged

broken legged
yet fighting
to stand strong
not to fall,
everyone is watching
waiting for it to fall
to shake to break
to lose balance
and control
but no
it wouldnt fall
standing on one leg
fighting storms
standing against the wind
knowing one day
its' pain'll end

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  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    June 4, 2008

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    such a well penned heartfelt write
    standing on one leg fighting storms you ended this fabulously im so much toucheed
    howcome no one has commented to this fair well penned poem:S
    hun these are finnnnest writess
    im so happy to read them