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A contest entry
- Love's Many Faces by Silly Rabbit..
600 points, ended May 22, 2008, 56 entries
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Wow
Incredible!
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Romantic....very sweet, but I think the end could have wrapped it up a little better.....you know? it just kindof cut off, like a story without a real ending. I love the whole theme and how you tied some of the words together, though.
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nice poem.. sounds romantic
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very nice
i really liked this one..keep up the great work ...i love the first two stanzas ...
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Hmmm this was quite an okay write... here in line 7 not hear? You're poetry is quite unique but you have to look through your work more you seem to make quite a lot of spelling mistakes throughout your pieces... other than that keep up the good work and keep writing!!
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I like this poem too. I love the ending line.
one line 7 hear should be here.
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great
i really like it -
This is so cute!!!!!!!!!
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Beautiful rhyme and emotion in this piece. You speak so strongly about this love and what it means to you. Excellent poem, keep writing dear poet!
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Aww - so sweet. What I like about this poem is the theme of not having to speak since the love is so potent it needs no words. Love the third verse particularly. The final verse implies that you may fall out too often but you desperately want to overcome this weakness. Good luck. Tony
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Wow!! You are an AWESOME poet!!!! This poem runs smootholy. And it rhymes! I love it! Good job!!!! If I may add a suggestion
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i love how you express yourself
you do a good job at it. i enjoy reading your poetry and also look to more in the future. stay strong and never fall back to what you are against. that is a good line of advice and one i am learning to follow.
-Jinx
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A sweetly romantic poem there.. nicely crafted words with free flowing words and good rhythm.. Thanx for sharing..
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bravo
Oh, soooo very roooomantic, indeed! A very nicely and deftly done poem here, with a wonderful use of short lines--not always so easily done-- bravo... bravo... bravo...
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