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The Madness

You don't know what I feel right now,
I just want to scream at every living thing
  "Just leave me alone",
I wish he was here but he isn't,
He can't be with me always
We spent the weeks apart,
It's a good thing
  I don't want him to watch as I slip further into
        Madness

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  • Akari
    November 6, 2008
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    Excellent!

    I agree with suicide Madness is not always a bad thing.


  • XLadyXVengeanceX
    June 13, 2008

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    madness is not always a bad thing it saves us from our selves and protect those dark and hatefull feelings i like this poem keep writing


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 8, 2008

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    Hmm, methinks a descent into madness is happenng here. Dark, and full of agony and frustration about the person you cannot be with. I like this. This is short but powerful. Keep writing.

    With
    Dark
    Love
    Wayne Leon