How sad that it should end this way
too many wreckless games to play,
pushing herself and luck too far
too many notes to fill the jar.
Caught fast within a self made trap
bad money falling in her lap,
profit her nothing good at all
amounting to her own downfall.
Author notes
http://www.deviantart.com/print/1303359/
Money money money by dancingperfect
A contest entry
- Art Inspiration!!!! by PerfectImperfection.
687 points, ended April 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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An interesting take on the image chosen here. Nice rhyme and flow throughout. Thank you so much for your entry!
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Brilliant!
I loved the beat and rhyme that was put into the poetry! Its a wonderful write and i hope all goes well in the contest!!
<3 mandy -
Yup! Miney; as they say, "the want of money is the root of all evil. Once again you are a wonderful rhymer.
Love,
Amera♥
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Wow! This is an excellent write for this prompt! I love the imagery that you have used here. Best of luck in the contest.
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