why do i feel dead inside
why do i feel hopeless
i thought this was the right thing
i thought a change in location would help
now all i have and will have is outta my control
i have lost it
i will get it back, but when
it seams my choice is not mine
i must leave a place i hat and go to a place i despised
i just wanted to better in my life
i wanted to do something with myself
now i don't think it will happen
there is always the choice of crime
but that wont do me any good
it will just turn into the thing i left h town for
i know it will change, but when
dose anyone understand this or am i just crazy
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it will get better soon. i haven't seen that much poetry from you in a while and i know when you write a poem you mean it. things will get better you could always move to another town you don't have to move back to hopkinville kentucky but there are people here that actually care about you that are your friends i know joe for a fact would do just about anything.
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This was well written, but if it be true....then stay strong, do not let your demons overcome you.
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this is good. looks like some spelling answers and i understand what you are saying. good write, keep writting.
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