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I never even smoked

You know what I love?
I love getting excited
and jumping
laughing
loving life

that is until

I can’t breathe

I cough till my lungs rattle
hacking, wheezing
wanting to lie down
to relax
and breathe

so I cough
and hack
and cough some more
tears trickling down my cheeks
and wondering

if I can ever get excited
and not cough till my lungs rattle.

Author notes

My parents smoked my WHOLE life and now I have asthma, so after about 2 minutes of physical activity I start to cough REALLY bad which then requires me to sit down and my eyes to water. I really hate it

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