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Aimless

On the shores
of insanity,
memories;
distant shadows.

I wonder
aimlessly,
caught in
tide's timeless

pull.

 

 

 

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  • PerfectImperfection
    April 11, 2008

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    A lovely sullen breath woven with so few words. A nice interpretation of the image in thought. Thank you so much for your entry!


  • Grimoire
    April 3, 2008

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    Succinct. Speaks of truths that are easy to relate to.Good luck in the contest.

    until exhale,
    Grimoire


  • darkhawk
    March 28, 2008

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    awesome!

    WOW! I loved this, you have insane talent! I really loved how you worded this and the emotion just flows perfectly out of it. Cant wait to read more! please comment some of my poetry 2, thanx!