Guarded and hidden
Wrapped in a rose with thorns
Never spoken...
Dwelling there
Aching with desire
Longing......
To be free
Author notes
Grammy Awards for HM winners ~ option~ * Another dark and lonely night
prompt ~hidden love~ 20 words
A contest entry
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450 points, ended March 28, 2008, 4 entries
Honorable mention
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Very well done!!
Thank you very much for the entry!
Becks
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Beautiful poem. The length works. It says enough but not to much in the length given. The last line really ends the poem well and summarizes it quite well. Beautiful title as well.
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If you didn't look at the title of this one, you wouldn't get the "never spoken" at least I wouldn't. But I do like the images you've penned.
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I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery.
To me, the title is part of the poem. The title is extremely important. It should be the very thing that captures someone's interest and makes them want to read it. It's the intro to all else to be said. It should be part of the life of the poem. When I read other peoples' poetry, the title is very important to me. A title can make me not want to read the poem or it can grab me and say 'you must read this'. When I write, I always put effort into the title. It should breathe the very content of what will be read.
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awesome!
WOW! I loved this, you have insane talent! I really loved how you worded this and the emotion just flows perfectly out of it. Cant wait to read more! please comment some of my stuff 2, thanx a lot! -
thanks
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