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left behind

and so she left, not only did it shatter my seemingly lofty abode of dreams and desires but the shards went through my unscathed field of dreams and left me in such a macabre state that i envied the dead..each fragment begging to be mended..looking at the detritus, hoping to revemp the pieces together, alas!, it cannot be done-

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  • darkhawk
    March 28, 2008

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    awesome!

    WOW! I loved this, you have insane talent! I really loved how you worded this and the emotion just flows perfectly out of it. Cant wait to read more! please comment some of my stuff 2, thanx a lot!