As blacks charge ahead
killing our mental balances,
white positives weep.
The dove of beauty gets injured
by the arrows of apathy
and blood oozes.
We search for peace
wishing to sing songs of love
and spring season helps.
Blossoming buds colorful
with pictorial extravaganza
and sprouting lives
from motherly wombs
cuddle with innocence.
Whispery spring
brings in beauty with hope
and sunny caressing
for all to get rejuvenated.
Hushed serenity
with crimson splendor
in mystic fauna
and echoed beauty
amidst natural exuberance
bring in poetic cadence.
The lyrical scenario
blends us for dreamy poetics
and blacks make hasty retreat.
Author notes
Option #2
"Spring shows what God can do with a drab and dirty world." ~Virgil A. Kraft
A contest entry
- Beauty of Springtime ~ quotes Inspired by m2lost24get.
550 points, ended March 30, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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A very original take on the subject, quite intrigueing. Congratulations on your win.


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congrats on the bronze..beautiful poem; potent & powerful message...
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wow deep and profound message brings forth ardent thoughts. your words paint a vibrant vision of hope. thank you for entering such an intense and profound write many blessings always xxx





