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Sexual Pleasuring

Standing firm, hanging strong,
strapped in position, where I belong.
His sexy form, leaning into mine,
hands like velvet, as he sweetly finds
that his sexual hunger captured me!

His mouth hungrily traces
the trail leading to erotic places.
Legs separated, as you tour my curves,
breathing intense, as you hit those nerves,
leaving me breathless, exploring ecstasy.

Strong fingers sliding under lace panties wet.
Wetter I become with every inch your lip’s pet.
Your mouth planted roughly on my breast
as removing my bra with your teeth, you tear the rest.
Body becoming weak yet the rope has control.

Pressure in the lower half, as I simply hang,
your mouth in a smile as your energy sprang.
Undress me with a delicate touch, I moan,
further in and out of my garden your fingers roam.
Hearts racing against your mouth, as nipples ache.

Yearning for a rapid release, I hold out,
you whisper sweet words, then in pleasure you shout.
“Get ready for what you know, I am in control,
you will meet your peak, and I will own heart and soul.”
His pressure on my thighs, bringing pleasure with such fury!

Standing behind me, his lips touring neck to below,
I can feel his nibbling intensify as his throbbing member grows.
My body trembles under his raging heat, his hot commands
lips traveling special spots that needed his warm hands.
Eyes closed, room over heated, fire blazed within.

Spreading open sweet ivory cheeks, sliding his head
up and down around my hole, no other words were said.
His hand placed around my throat, holding me in place,
as he adjusted himself, and rammed it deep, pleasure on his face.
Sweet pain spread across mine, as I moaned with erotic bliss.

In and out, fast in pace then he slowed the momentum,
as he reached for his whip, and brought it across my bum.
Raging red my cheeks got, moisture rose and then dropped,
pressure building to the hilt, my cherry had been popped.
High about in the air, a I squirted cum everywhere.

Author notes

Pic prompt:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v316/Anstorm/Sensual_masochism.png

BG credit to Cricketjeff, Thanks hun for arranging it for me.

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  • joleahe
    April 2, 2008
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    WOW!!!! dang this is hot! great job...your a finalist...thank you


  • Griswold
    April 2, 2008

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    I love it baby, quite a tale of erotic bondage, well done from start to finish, good luck baby. Love you, Scott


  • Commonsuicide
    March 28, 2008
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    I love it. Virgin sex


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    March 28, 2008
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    YUM!

  • mcfreeman
    March 28, 2008
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    Again!

    The right touch.


  • Corvus Corone
    March 28, 2008

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    I like the jolting feel to this like little electric shocks to the senses... grins!!! For me that really adds to a powerfully sexy write. That reminds me must check the TENS is in working order for when ju gets here...


  • Lady Altheia
    March 27, 2008

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    The background is really light. As for the poem, it is hot. Maybe I am not reading it right. To me it sounded choppy. The rhyme was well done in some places but then in other places, there was free verse. It didn't flow between the free verse and rhyme.


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    March 27, 2008

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    your poem flows of the erotic passion of your soul... every ounce of lustfilled desire can be clearly seen and felt within your amazing poem. It flows so wonderfully and the pace quickens in a natural rhythm and captures the reader within the magic you created...


  • Angelflower
    March 27, 2008

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    Oh my

    Well.. hmm.. I really liked this.. you took me into a world I didn't know with this piece.. Grea write.. I really enjoyed reading this and good luck with the contest..


  • delightfulmess silver member
    March 27, 2008

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    .... You should sell some of your stuff
    to penthouse auntie. Have I said that before

    Well nevermind that lets start our own magazine
    we call "muse penetration" or some shit like that.
    You could make a bundle.


    Delila


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      March 27, 2008
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      Now look at it Neice..Yes you have said it many of times lol. I love you..and thanks for the encouragment.

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